Jak napisać list z zażaleniem (reklamacyjny)? (FCE, CAE, CPE)
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List z zażaleniem (reklamacyjny): Definicja
List z zażaleniem (reklamacyjny) to skarga pisana do odpowiednich władz lub osoby odpowiedzialnej, jeśli nie jesteśmy zadowoleni ze świadczonych usług lub sposobu w jaki zostaliśmy potraktowani. Powinien być napisany w stylu formalnym. Czasami, gdy otrzymujemy wadliwy produkt, piszemy list do osoby lub firmy powiązanej z reklamacją produktu.
List z zażaleniem (reklamacyjny): Struktura/Format
Warto spojrzeć na przykładowy szablon listu z zażaleniem (reklamacyjnego):
1. Powitanie Dear Sir or Madam / Dear Manager |
2. Paragraf wprowadzający Określ, na czym polega problem. |
3. Kolejne paragrafy (treść główna) Skarga 1 i uzasadnienie Skarga 2 i uzasadnienie Skarga 3 i uzasadnienie |
4. Paragraf zamykający Sugerowane działanie, które należy podjąć – zakończ słowami: Yours faithfully |
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List z zażaleniem (reklamacyjny): Przewodnik
1. Powitanie
Dear Sir/ Madam / Manager / To whom it may concern,
Jeśli nie znasz imienia osoby, do której piszesz, użyj tych zwrotów. Pamiętaj, że zawsze lepiej, jeśli uda Ci się zaadresować skargę bezpośrednio.
Dear Mr Jenkins
Jeśli znasz dane osoby do której piszesz, użyj tytułu (Mr, Mrs, Miss or Ms, Dr itp.) i tylko nazwiska (bez imienia). Jeśli piszesz do kobiety i nie wiesz jakiej formy użyć, powinienneś zastosować formę Ms, która może zostać użyta zarówno w przypadku mężatki jak i panny.
Zawsze powinieneś być uprzejmy i pełen szacunku, nawet jeśli narzekasz. Przydatnym sposobem na osiągnięcie tego, zwłaszcza w listach formalnych, jest użycie „czasowników modalnych”, tj. would, could or should.
2. Paragraf wprowadzający
Powinieneś określić, na czym polega problem i podać wszelkie istotne informacje, które uważasz za istotne. Podaj więcej szczegółów, jeśli może mieć to znaczenie w danej sytuacji.
I want to express my strong dissatisfaction with the service I received during a visit to your restaurant on…
3. Kolejne paragrafy (treść główna)
Powinienneś szerzej opisać swoją opinię i odczucia związane ze zgłaszanym problemem. Pamiętaj jednak, aby trzymać się faktów i unikać nadmiernych emocji w swoim liście.
- Podaj istotne szczegóły takie jak czas wystąpienia problemu, lokalizację, zaangażowane osoby oraz rodzaj problemu.
- Każda skarga/reklamacja powinna być poparta uzasadnieniem:Skarga: I still haven’t t received the goods.
Uzasadnienie: I sent you a cheque three weeks ago.
4. Paragraf zamykający
Napisz czego oczekujesz i jakie widzisz rozwiązanie problemu. Możesz także dla równowagi powiedzieć kilka komplementów na temat produktu lub usługi firmy, które Ci się podobały.
Yours faithfully
{You name}
„Yours sincerely” czy „Yours faithfully”?
„Yours sincerely” używamy w języku angielskim, gdy zwracamy się do adresata po imieniu (np. „Dear John”) i jest on w jakimś stopniu nam znany. Zwrot „Yours faithfully” jest używany, gdy odbiorca jest nam nieznany i nie zwracamy się imieniem i nazwiskiem (tj. gdy używamy zwrotu „Dear Sir/Madam”)
WSKAZÓWKA: Pamiętaj o „linkowaniu” w liście!Między paragrafami: Firstly, I had booked table […] W ramach paragrafu: My wife and I will not […]; however, […] |
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List z zażaleniem (reklamacyjny): Przykłady
Temat listu z zażaleniem (reklamacyjnego):
You and a friend, Sam, bought some CDs to help you improve your English. You were not happy with the CDs and have decided to write to the publisher, CD World. Read the email from Sam and the advertisement for the CDs below, on which you have made some notes. Then, using the information appropriately, write a letter to CD World explaining why you bought the CDs, why you are dissatisfied and saying what you would like the company to do.
Przykładowa odpowiedź studenta:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my disappointment with the course of English language CDs which I purchased from your company a few days ago. I have a good theoretical knowledge of English grammar and I was hoping that your course would help me to improve my conversational fluency and my knowledge of business English, but I feel your product is unsatisfactory and your advertisement is misleading in several respects.
To begin with, your advertisement states that the course provides English conversation for pleasure and business. This naturally leads one to expect that there are commercial English conversations on the CDs, and yet no such conversations are included. In addition, the student is expected to listen and repeat the conversations, but there is not enough time to do this without constantly pressing the “pause” button. Finally, your advertisement gives the impression that the price for the whole course is 20 euros, whereas in fact the CDs cost 20 euros each. The total price is thus 120 euros. I feel this is, to say the least, somewhat misleading.
For these reasons, I am most dissatisfied with your product. I am returning the CDs and expect a full refund. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully
(your name)
Temat listu z zażaleniem (reklamacyjnego):
You recently took a self-catering holiday in a luxury apartment, but the standard of the accommodation was very poor. The holiday company that you booked with have offered you some vouchers as compensation, but you have decided you would prefer a cash refund instead. Write a letter to the company outlining the problems you experienced with the accommodation and the action you want them to take.
Przykładowa odpowiedź studenta:
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to complain about the bad standard of accommodation during my last holiday. I booked this self-catering holiday last year in your travel agency. When I returned from my two-week travel last week, I immediately visited the agency to complain about my bad experiences.
Had I known that the accomodation would be so poor, I would have booked from the beginning a full-service holiday. What I expected was a luxury apartment with a small oven. Not only was the room dirty and full of bugs, but the shower was broken and unusable. To make matters even worse, there was no oven as I ordered it. Never before have I seen such a bad service at a self-catering holiday. You can imagine my anger when I had to eat out, smelling like a … Not surprisingly, I booked another room, though without oven but clean and with a working shower. Therefore this room cost a lot more than the other one and I had to go out eating.
My purpose in visiting the agency was to ask for compensation. The young lady who served me offered some vouchers as compensation. She advised me to take my time with the answer. I have decided to ask your company for a cash refund. Would a refund about 500 euros be too much to expect? I would like to ask you to have a look on my enclosed accounts. Seeing how much money I had to invest additionally will help you to decide what to do about the whole matter.
At the very least, I would like you to inform me of the action you will take with regard to my extra invested money. Unless adequate action is taken, I shall have no other option but to publish this letter in the local newspaper.
Yours faithfully,
Ilona
Temat listu z zażaleniem (reklamacyjnego):
You recently had a short holiday organized by TravelWise. The manager of the company sent you a letter asking to state the problems which had occurred during your vacation. Write a letter to the manager, explaining what the problems were and telling them what you want them to do.
Write your letter. Don’t include any postal addresses.
Przykładowa odpowiedź studenta:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with reference to your letter, where you politely requested a feedback of my recent vacation organized by TravelWise. As you already know I was displeased with numerous points.
Firstly, the hotel I stayed was located in a run-down and dangerous neighbourhood, on few occasions I was approached by a drug dealer and a beggar. When it comes to the room it was completely different from what had been presented in your brochure. Dirt, darkness and rats were my company throughout the stay, I actually changed rooms few times, however it seemed all the rooms were in similar condition.
One of the reasons I had chosen your company was the free of charge spa and trips organized by your staff. It turned out that I had to pay extra for all of these services. And although it might be true that the water sports provided were amazing it does not change the fact my holiday was ruined by the above problems.
I must ask you to refund all the costs of my vacation including extra charge for spa and trips please.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sam Smith
List z zażaleniem (reklamacyjny): Tematy
You recently stayed at one of a chain of large hotels and encountered a number of problems during your stay. Write a letter to the company’s head office detailing the problems you had, describing what happened when you complained to the hotel staff and suggesting ways the company could improve its service.
(CAE 220-260 słów– CPE 280-320 słów)
You and a friend, Sam, bought some CDs to help you improve your English. You were not happy with the CDs and have decided to write to the publisher, CD World. Read the email from Sam and the advertisement for the CDs below, on which you have made some notes. Then, using the information appropriately, write a letter to CD World explaining why you bought the CDs, why you are dissatisfied and saying what you would like the company to do.
(CAE 220-260 słów– CPE 280-320 słów)
You recently travelled to work by train, and were appalled because the train was dirty and the canteen facilities were poor. Due to work on the tracks, your train failed to arrive at its destination on time, which made you late for work. You have decided to write a letter of complaint to the railway company, expressing your views and stating what you expect them to do about the problem.
(CAE 220-260 słów– CPE 280-320 słów)
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List z zażaleniem (reklamacyjny): Porady
- Skoncentruj się na najważniejszych faktach. Nie podawaj zbędnych informacji.
- Upewnij się, że zawarłeś:
- powód dla którego piszesz (np. I am writing to …)
- co poszło nie tak
- jakiego rozwiązania oczekujesz
- Listy z zażaleniem (reklamacyjne)są zwykle pisane w formalnym stylu.
- Użyj strony biernej, aby być mniej bezpośrednim i bardziej formalnym, np. I was served quickly.
- Użyj wyrażenia Yours faithfully aby się pożegnać, jeśli nie znasz nazwiska osoby, do której piszesz.
Także:
- Sprawdź swój list po jego napisaniu- strukturę zdań, gramatykę, błędy ortograficzne…
- Ponownie sprawdź swój list i popraw ewentualne błędy.
- Odnoś się z szacunkiem do odbiorcy, nawet jeśli piszesz skargę.
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List z zażaleniem (reklamacyjny): Przydatne zwroty i wyrażenia
Rozpoczęcie
Dear Sir or Madam, / To whom it may concern,
I am writing to express my disappointment with/dissatisfaction with the service I received in…
I would like to lodge a formal complaint against your company for the reasons outlined below:
I feel compelled to write to you in order to describe the
Wypunktowanie problemów
First of all,
Not only was there a hair in my wife’s soup, but the main course also arrived cold.
On top of that…
As if that was not enough…
To top it all off…
My first complaint is
The first problem is
The first thing I would like to draw your attention to is
My first concern is
The straw that broke the camel’s back was…
Wyrażenia typowe dla reklamacji
The standard of the… was not up to scratch.
The… was not up to the expected standard.
The… left a lot to be desired.
The… failed to live up to our expectations.
We were left bitterly disappointed by…
The quality of the customer service we received was woefully inadequate.
The… was an absolute disgrace. (v.strong)
Overall, our visit to your (restaurant) was an unmitigated disaster from start to finish.
Sugerowane rozwiązanie/oczekiwania
It seems only fair that you should… (offer a full refund)
I would appreciate it if you…
I would be grateful if you…
I suggest that you replace the item
I therefore suggest that I be given a full refund
I would be grateful if my money was refunded
I would be grateful if you could give me a full refund
Should these demands not be met, you will be hearing from my lawyers.
I expect to receive compensation to the tune of (€2000) for the…
Zalecenia
I strongly recommend that your organisation…
It would be advisable to…
I suggest re-evaluating your procedures regarding…
Zwroty kończące list
I look forward to receiving your reply.
I look forward to hearing from you
I look forward to receiving a full refund
I look forward to receiving a replacement
I look forward to receiving your explanation
I expect to receive a prompt reply to this letter.
Yours faithfully,
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